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:) for some reason I really like this one. Probably because it looks like filigree to me (delicate decorative openwork made from thin twisted wire in silver, gold, or another metal) Some kind of seed pod or somthing like that.

Critiques


:icontimothy-sim:
I usually start with the good points in most occasions, but i'll start with the ones that need to be worked on first this time.

What i thought was strange and odd was the grain and noise in the background of this macro. It seemed a little too distracting.

I also looked closer (however close I could press my nose to the screen) and noticed the beginning of this macro being pixelated. I was pretty put off by that. Perhaps you had cropped it, zoomed it in, and then sharpened it a little too much? I cannot tell for sure.

But as far as I criticize, I cannot fault you any further because I find that the picture is well composed, well lighted in tone, perfectly set up in a manner that let's us not be distracted by the backgrounds and best of all, post processed in a colour that simply makes this look good.

Did I mention? Even the frame makes this picture look good.

What I liked about the intricate detail (pixilated or not aside) is that it looks so much like a steel structure that was woven so nicely to form a leaf. When it was actually real.

You certainly have an eye for this. Perhaps you should invest in a DSLR with a macro lens to pursue this talent!
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:iconmscherry76:
fragile, yet still standing!
:iconblackiliner:
i like it, it looks so delicate :)

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:iconrammstein13:
excellent shot. the amount of detail is amazing.

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:iconfutureplug:
Great detail, and I love how it just seems to be floating. And great tones as well.

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:iconbutterfly36rs:
Very beautiful. Excellent tones as well.

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:iconlostinajungle:
I love this! When I first saw the thumbnail, I thought it was a dress for a fairy. lol, it's beautiful!
:icongironzalon:
Really nice shot! But what is it? :)
We like the background, too!
:iconlostinajungle:
I really like this piece, and I featured it in my journal [link]

If you don't want it featured, just let me know and I'll take it down.

Awesome work!!

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October 16, 2007
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Camera Data

FUJIFILM
FinePix S5200
1/468 second
F/3.2
8 mm
100
Apr 8, 2007, 2:53:05 AM

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